tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32943238.post5786080499095048642..comments2023-10-24T19:06:45.361+11:00Comments on Brand New Ending: D is for ... decorativeUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32943238.post-15585888352066852122009-02-02T04:33:00.000+11:002009-02-02T04:33:00.000+11:00Ooo, I like it. The "d" sound really comes through...Ooo, I like it. The "d" sound really comes through. I think the omnipresence of a letter comes through much more strongly than the absence of a letter -- a poetic strength. "Splendid, suspended" is my favorite phrase.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32943238.post-13851210667991376472009-01-31T08:05:00.000+11:002009-01-31T08:05:00.000+11:00I hear the drums beating... nice job.I hear the drums beating... nice job.tesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14651702526007175517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32943238.post-16228484565578400022009-01-31T01:25:00.000+11:002009-01-31T01:25:00.000+11:00I love the sounds and rhythm, especially in the fi...I love the sounds and rhythm, especially in the first two stanzas. Thanks for sharing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32943238.post-89245860304628987562009-01-31T01:04:00.000+11:002009-01-31T01:04:00.000+11:00I like the poem very much and I got the leap to gr...I like the poem very much and I got the leap to gratitude. Maybe you just need to add something that connects your response to the dragonfly's darting beauty.Andromeda Jazmonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12355192738014962965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32943238.post-68952870036596913422009-01-30T08:21:00.000+11:002009-01-30T08:21:00.000+11:00That was referring back to me in a kind of count y...That was referring back to me in a kind of count your blessings way. Hmmm... I will think on it for a while - it may be better without it!Mythhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03243071725565727650noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32943238.post-39815050793729141692009-01-30T08:17:00.000+11:002009-01-30T08:17:00.000+11:00i love the poem- although the last line left me a ...i love the poem- although the last line left me a bit confusedSteffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07831058765412455722noreply@blogger.com